Tuesday, January 10, 2012

Distance Comments

Rating: 3.8

My mind
with all the precious
treasures of memories
travels a lot...
...
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Shahzia Batool
COMMENTS
Passionate Reader 02 July 2013

Great compression! ! ! wise, true and insightful! ! ! :)

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Heather Wilkins 13 June 2013

short and to the point. I like short poems. I love the thought of this poem. The distance is short between you and me.

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Farah Ilyas 12 May 2013

wao brief but amazing poem, to write a brief poem to show some one's worth inspiration ally, wholly & completely is really hard task to do, but when it comes from a brillient poetess like you, there is no need to surprise

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Sun Shine 08 May 2013

A simple yet complete poem.

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Yasmin Khan 30 April 2013

It's nostalgic, brief and brisk, with a beautifully built paradox.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 November 2012

Brisk but very nice poem! Go to member club/member area then inbox to read yor mails. And tel me if u still cant see them. God bless.

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Walterrean Salley 11 October 2012

Profound Shahzia. And skillfully penned.

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Shumaila Bari 13 September 2012

I feel true 'break-down' of language to describe how simply you summed up an overwhelming phenomenon of our lives.

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Captain Cur 02 June 2012

Yes! You have touched many peoples minds and emotions with your insightful, beautiful, easy to understand, yet deeply moving words.

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Shihabudheen K J 16 May 2012

great indeed..........so short but so promising lines.........the meaning of distance is so big..........

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Ramesh Rai 26 April 2012

Indeed a long journey but very closer

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Wahab Abdul 23 March 2012

an excellent piece! heat to heart is the distance the journey took along with memories of the journey itself.

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Rizvana Parveen 20 March 2012

lovely lines...........

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Jahan Zeb 29 January 2012

Wonderful work. I really like it.

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Molay Toufik 24 January 2012

O.M.G...... WHAT IS THAT IT'S REALLY SHORT BUT TRULY WONDERFUL IT'S EASY TO READ HARD TO WRITE I LIKE THIS PICE OF ART KEEP IT SINCERELY

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Vipins Puthooran 23 January 2012

This's fantastic! ! ! ! ! ! top marks! ! ! ! ! **************but the distance of its journey will be decided by my heart*************

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Gordon Tseng 11 January 2012

My mind with all the precious treasures of imagination travels a lot... but the distance of its journey is from being to unbeing...

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Shahzia Batool

Shahzia Batool

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