Saturday, March 17, 2007

Dissolving Into Ghost Comments

Rating: 4.8

At dinnertime,
I softly gaze out the window
Into the evening turning black.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Dee Daffodil 18 March 2007

Sadness weeps from your poem...very nicley done...very touching! Hugs, Dee

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Mary Nagy 17 March 2007

What a heartbreaking look into sadness. And a glimpse into the depression many have (and still do) share... it's only sad that so many 'share' this feeling yet each are still alone. Uriah, I have missed you! I hope you are doing well! Love, Mary

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Bill Smith 17 March 2007

ouch! ! felt this with a big O, well writ

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Alison Smith 17 March 2007

What a wonderful feel this poem evokes... though sad Alison

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