Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Dissolve In The Air Comments

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I had nothing to lose
To me it was clear
I listened to blues
The sky was so near
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Olga Ogradyuk
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Bri Edwards 30 March 2018

I love the flow and rhyming. for this one i did not 'need' to completely understand in order to completely enjoy it. very poetic! very nice. favorite lines: The moon seemed a lime Stars were like salt................(i'll add: A moment in time, sky of cobalt.) Now get back to lawyering! ! ! and say hi to Putin for me. thanks. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 December 2013

very nice.simple and sweet and touching.liked it.

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