Wednesday, February 22, 2023

Dissolution Comments

Rating: 5.0

Painful to be left
Excruciating when left
Everything bereft
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Rob Lamberton
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Richard Wlodarski 24 February 2023

Pain is the body's way of showing mental disharmony. Excellent work, Rob!

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M. Asim Nehal 23 February 2023

Very thoughtful. I enjoyed the witty part.

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Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

That makes me laugh! Thanks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 February 2023

Dissolution always comes with a price specially in a relationship/marriage. A poem cleverly written.

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Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

Appreciate your faithful reviews and comments!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 February 2023

I am also in agreement

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Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

: )

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M.J. Lemon 22 February 2023

Pain has no companionship. It has no friends. A fantastic verse, Rob!

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Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

M.J. Appreciate the affirming comments!

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Emma Duval 22 February 2023

I can agree with you, Rob! 'Painful to be left.'

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Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

Thanks for visiting Emma, and for following me!

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