Dissappointment Comments

That's a lot of negatives listed there. It's nice how you made the lines so short; how essentially disappointment comes and goes. Great work. Never stop writing! -M

wow thts sounds like alot of pain that you are going through good poem alot of hurt full feelings sounding like know one will ever come and pick you up just a life to sit alone with no one to ever to hold... just trust me your day will come when it is your time to rise and be you