Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Disregard Me, Please Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lay upon the ground
on my knees and destitute,
pleading with my eyes
before your throne.
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Soren Valentine
COMMENTS
Caroline Bulleck 03 October 2012

This is amazing in detail and emotion. I personally like sad poems, so I enjoyed it very much. Job well done.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 September 2012

the emotions are extracted from the heart to write this poem!

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