Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Displaced Comments

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my world is uprooted
taken by force of
nature and ripped from
earth and skin
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YURI DURAAN
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Sadiqullah Khan 19 June 2008

the last line suddenly makes u think differently from the main subject, , making it larger than what appears, , nice write

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Broken Peaces 18 June 2008

Your world is that of a warm personality, tender in thought and of abounding talent regards Chris 10

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YURI DURAAN

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