Tuesday, August 15, 2006

Dismissed Comments

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Dismissed
As if I never existed
Banished
Without the benefit of words
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A.J. McKinley
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Daniel Tyler 29 August 2006

I love the repetion of dismissed and banished, it gives the poem a hollow, mechanical sound, which is perfect for a poem of that theme. Well done.

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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