Dislocation Comments

it's so much in the fitness of things...doesn't everything begin with a particular objective and end up as something else...we're all wind-prone!

How wonderful to imagine a kiss sent along the air and landing on some unsuspecting person's cheek! ! ! Bet they were thrilled... Lovely poem Onelia. HG: -) xx

Awonderful mix up of humour and sarcam. Loved it. O dear, you sent a flying kiss, Such kisses many a time miss. LOL! ! ! ! !

Nice poem, a kiss went astray and landed on another cheek. 10 for this.

Wow! How nice is form of the poem; how beautiful is the content of the poem! Really nice job done so far sending a kiss! Enjoyed.

Overestimate the conductivity of air....true not only for love in every other sense..nice write10

wonderful! interesting title

Had to come back to this one. It's so very clever, multi-layered and delivering many messages the more you read it. HG: -) xx

Beautifully said. The kiss may land anywhere, Its fragrance of love is in the air.

Original and amusing. Kisses that land where they shouldn't...food for thought!

Lucky was that cheek...............beautiful poem with the flying kiss

Brilliant! Saved as a fave. Fx

imprint might be dappled kiss might be scalar or vector, , , , , , , , , , , , , wonderful imagery by the love, well penned, thanks

You suggest it didn't land in dis location - but did in dat! Nice tight construction with clever rhyme. Rgds, Ivan

hahahahah or wind currents for that matter ;) .....awesome and original

Perhaps it was fate and the unintended recipient of this kiss is worth pursuing? Just a thought.... another gem here Onelia, j x

...and on the chord of a bungee.... LOL! ! ! ! you have streeeeeetched this one... as always... blown away beautifully... aroha...

How lovely! I once remember someone sending me a kiss that 'went round corners' - this reminded me of that.... a very clever little poem Onelia! HG: -) xx

I don't believe that Mrs. Avelar overstimates the conductivity of the air. Her feeling gets to us by air very well, together with her refined style. Do we remember the 'Sonnets' by Shakespeare?