Monday, September 15, 2008

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The pain enables your will power, like the
sand that sucks in the waves of the oceans
edge- it can't flood much more. Life is all
about pain, if you let it rule- pain smiles,
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Elena Toledo
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Well designed and crafted poem, surely Elena you know what is pain, and what is the cost of it. But you give us hope as well (will power) . Thanks for those verses.

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Javier Falcon 15 September 2008

Finally a writer from my native location... This is a well structured piece of write, as I can relate to the thinkings of pain, and how it affects us... Well, splendid write...

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Elena Toledo

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