** Disillusioned With God ** Comments

It was so far the best of the lot of poems u have written. Rhythm mingles with thoughts. Beautiful, excellent. Really, very touching... especially the last line. Disillusionment cannot create such a great poem. It is a positive outlook of life

I like this a lot :)

Contradictions of emotions well portrayed in the poem

'You forced my legs to trudge When evil chained my knees, You forced my soul to pray Whilst lips hurled abuses on thee'. Beautiful poem. Well penned I like it lot. Thanks for sharing with me

really good poem. i liked it a lot.

There is no dissillusion with your poems and this one is indeed no acception the ending was wonderful, it makes us think hard of God and all his guidence +++++++++++10 regards

nice poem... liked reading it... thanks

a lovely poem... but it is your choice to accept the gift or not... but before you accept it you MUST understand it to have the full happy and wonderful experience of it... take my word... a lovely poem...

God is always guiding us Anju... understand our weaknesses too that's why I love your thoughts here.. so honest...and full of humility we are just human to be acting that way..but God is always here to guide us...we are human but God is here to light our mind to do the right thing and your piece says it all... God is always helping us to stride in a straight path..if possible..(smile) i love this piece Anju...a piece with divine touch food for thoughts... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

after so long someone i totally get! love the poem. its beautiful. sent a shiver down my spine. cant really say much else! thanks for sharing.

Anjali, this is so nice piece love the rythm so great luwi

a very different poem...with many paradoxes... not very clear to me, i must admit! though, loved to read it. thank you.

Brilliant Rhyme. Great homage to our eternal protector. Perfect 10.

Oh I am never disappointed! I love your poems a lot..

Oh I am never disappointed! I love your poems a lot..

A good poem to read and enjoy..Thanks Anjali..

God proposes man disposes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

You show me the flower and yet, I'm not allowed to touch, we blame God for our own weakness after all we are only human :) Andy 10 missed you to Angel :)

How you dare to give, Honey to a bee Who wants to be drowned in A sorrow filled sea. ----- A fine poem to ponder on... are you referring to a God or god, coz there's a big difference between the two? I guess you wanted to say god which disillussioned you....Thanks for this lovely poem with fine rhymes and nice diction...10/10

brilliant symbolic write of grievance vs affection...but God has its own way to let us stand against the evil and to trust Him......an intriguing poem to ponder....10