Friday, December 15, 2017

Disillusion Comments

Rating: 5.0

Vegetating in a slumber,
Knitting cobwebs,
No more dreams
Disappointed in Life's cover,
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Sandra Feldman
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Jette Blackstone 19 December 2017

Try some melatonin...it helps with the sleeping. As far as life's cover, it can often be disappointing....but what can we do? Do our best and look for inspiration...sometimes poetry does the trick.

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Bill Cantrell 15 December 2017

Knitting cobwebs, these are powerful words of disillusion, very sad yet, sometimes when we thing we are out of dreams, suddenly one is knocking at the door, your poetry always has such substance Sandra

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