Disgrace Of My Existence Comments

Another beautiful work. Wonder what ails your young heart...hoping for some happier ones

Once a teddy always a teddy. Life sometimes deals to us some very hard blows sometimes. Either we fall down under pressure or roll with the punches. Keep the faith. I have a poem called Walk by Faith. Thanks for sharing yours.

I love the creativity you used in using a old stuffed animal. You did a good job twisting the thought into somthing way darker. Great read.

A well written poem, I like especially the line “I was a part of your tears”, so beautiful.

strong emotion............ i like it........kep doing the good work......... god bless u...........

Wow.... That was very from your heart.... Felt that.... Appreciable job.... Like it... Keep doing the good work.... :)

This poem reflects the dying thoughts of a.teddy. I don't think you are personally pessimistic! You are so young & there IS A GREAT LIFE ahead of you.Well written.Wish you all the best in poetry world.

you have done a wonderful job...the second part is so amazing.! i really enjoyed it. the pain of a heart is beatifully drawn here...thanks for sharing »so close«

strong emotions, great poem

i like the poem :) really good write

hey nice poem full of emotions... But dont be so pessimistic....enjoy your life to the fullest....God bless you...

This undoubtfully is a great piece. I love it