Sunday, October 5, 2008

Disenchanted Comments

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laughter could have been but it wasn't
and she didn't know where
because she didn't care to
walked on down to the chorus line
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Fallen Too Far
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Min Sia 09 November 2008

And really disenchanted. Nice words..very touching. It flows through me! It's great!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 October 2008

Very poignant....with wonderful rhymes and great rhythm......glad I read this.

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Fallen Too Far

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