Diseased Heart Comments
Don't you forget that torrential day in July
You walked into the room looking so fine
The tears of heaven leaking from the sky
Wearing my pretty white shoes I asked, 'Is your hotel nearby? '
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Your stanzas are very mature beyond your age... you will reach what you wanted hence...soon...!
This poem was absolutely fantastic! Such depth, and the wording is amazing. Beautiful. Keep writing!
'tis such a wonderful poem, written by heart! ! ! ! ! top markss
A wonderful poem..says so much, shows how things come and go. Lifes experiences are to be lived. very good.
Beautiful poem dipicting INSANE times. You are a good poet illusion or experience makes no difference. Good luck. Thanks for reference.10/10 from me.
to love is to pain...your vivid details exerts all the passion felt in this relationship...u can tell u feel alot built up inside...u speak from your heart..one of the most important characteristics of being a true poet.
I was on a journey, found myself reminiscing..., every single word captivated me, i'm so emotional.Beautifull honest writing.
emotional, cool, calmness, a beautiful write. I do appreciate your feelings.
what a write, emotional whirlwind, spiralling all the way, .
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8/3/2025 1:31:11 PM # 1.0.0
Very nice poem I really enjoyed reading it very well written and overall great!