Sunday, February 15, 2009

Disdainfully Delicious Saboteur! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do you mockingly gaze at the world
After breaking another rule
As if to say
Now what do you have to say to that?
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Anita Atina
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Jim Norausky 15 February 2009

Terrific poem. Well structured with an understandable message. Well done. Jim

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