Sunday, October 22, 2006

Discrimination Comments

Rating: 4.6

Despise the eyes with tears
Resent the heart with fears
Beaten and reluctant
To hear the repeated words
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Rachael Hardy
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Profound philosophy that supports the marvalous concept of equality. Keep writing.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 December 2008

A bitter truth has been poetized very well. The last line uplifts the poem to its peak.......10/10.

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Aldane Smith 04 November 2006

Let me be honest...you said you started writing a few months back but ur 'art' is developing i really love this poem Rach. Deep~~much luV :)

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