Saturday, February 14, 2009

Discovery Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am on heaven's door, everytime you look at me
I am one step closer to a different reality
Steeped in ecstasy, I do not even have the words to best describe
what you do to me.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 04 April 2009

Ouch! I was lifted by the first 4 lines - only to be dumped hard on the floor by the next 4! Clearly this was exactly as it was for you and you have created it beautifully for us too. (PS you need to make it 'describe' in line3)

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