Discovery Comments

Great poem, a lot of depth, filled with powerful imagery. I can relate. Thanks for sharing.

Hey! Hey! This time you donned the role of philosopher, so what yet the perfection, the same passion, the same powerful knock out punch is there in this poem. It is grace to read your poems as sense the thrill in reading. Two hands went up - one to congratulate the poem another to pat the shoulder of the poet! Ha! Ha! Ha! ..................

One thing I do like is your very open honest feelings, so very important to relate the passions in writings. Very good.

Ah, very interesting, and philosophical. I enjoyed this one. To sleep is to let the world go by, but sometimes, we feel that's all we can really do. Great write.