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The sun is a planet too hot to survive.
A ball of fire that will burn you alive.
Mercury the heavenly body, that orbits the sun.
It's the smallest planet, the size of a bun.
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Rosie, I just finished helping my 9 year old grandson construct a model of the planets, so all of these felt very familiar! Scarlett
Very clever. The reader is captivated in the cadence of the words. It amuses and informs all at once. Excellent job!
You have kept the reader engaged and this is a beautiful style of writing.Brilliant! Love Duncan
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8/6/2025 1:38:44 AM # 1.0.0
Oh Sylvia, you have captured the creative side of our universe in your composure brillently. I just adore your creative writing and can see many others do as well. Now I want to Thank You for sharing your gift with all of us and for giving us more of you. You are a Gem Sylvia. Your Reading Fan, Mickey Pig Knuckles :)