DISCOVER DOUSED DELIGHT
esspeecee …19.06.09.
Past like a 'just' to me...
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Candid style of diction addressing to timeframe with preponderance of Present. Ten++ PO PO
Nice poem with nice idea. Present, past and future are there. Stunning 10+++
a wonderful poem with beautiful flow filled by wisdom..enjoyed the reading..10++++
a good write......... well selected words presented in good poem.........
Immense power in this poem! Past and future are sent to many many light years far. Ten for present but minus for past and future LOL!