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this is a pat to the shoulder of someone longing. you're a very sensitive person with very keen eyes, sir. very nice poem! 10: -)

Amazing poem it is Asraful Musaddeq! ! very nice pirce! ...10

Great use of images involving lots of the senses. Nice rhyme of “spreads” and “threads”. “A person is shutting down the extensive antic door of eye lids.” - very original

delightful metaphors and the use of color is artistic and enchanting

I really liked this poem as it is with a great flow and talks of spiritual presence which is interesting.

another powerful write, transcending the physical..moving into the surreal

lovely colorful pictures and able metaphors poignant and touching, keep discovering!

thanks for appreciating my poem.uuu this one, truly wonderful! write on!

Wonderful first stanza. I like the abstract destination here - the land of Nostalgia, the small marble slowly moving... Well penned!