Discordant Notes Comments

Anita, a poignant message sent out with this beautiful poem. Two heart can fall out of love just as easily as they fell into it. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

Yes...this is a painful dilemma I know all to well, so well expressed...

Such a lullaby two hearts must listens to, to know the pain is the same no matter how you play it.

Indeed, 'two tuning forks vibrating at different frequencies! ' Vivid imagery from the cancerous pair to discordant tuning forks! Concrete images that convey the underlying emotion - that's poetry!

emotions are explicitely drawn.., sometimes discordedness may be fatal to a relationship... but the world tunes in different frequeny altogether, , very well expressed...