Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Discord Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hanging in the air like discordant minims
silence speaks the words unspoken,
the words to confirm their love lies broken -
shattered beyond repair.
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Iris Blue
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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2019

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Chuck Audette 02 January 2014

Perfect words to describe how that wall of silence in bed crushes the soul while it stands. -chuck

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Original Unknown Girl 26 November 2013

Oh this resonates....... I think I wrote something similar once but never as beautifully crafted as this. Beautiful. HG: -) x

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Jim Hogg 20 November 2013

There are times when there is nothing louder than silence, and it's always tempting to try to shrink from it when it's so overwhelming, to smother it.. perceptive, precise and penetrating as always Justine, but also tangible and audible to boot.... xx

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