Friday, October 3, 2014

Disconnection Comments

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On the platform, the people
Are waiting for the subway train.
A baby plays with his mother's hair.
Such delicate hold of the black tuft,
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Elena Sandu
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 27 November 2014

of insensitive world we may get to live... with... No chance for escape... A beautiful poem which describes the hollowness of machines trying to surpass the beauty of love.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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* Sunprincess * 25 November 2014

...........those moments were captured nicely.....and yes, it's true technology will never take the place of love.....enjoyed this poem :)

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 03 October 2014

Baby plays with mother's hair in plat form, there is no chance for escape to read this beautiful life observing poem. Well done, well done. Nice on sharing.

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