Saturday, January 24, 2015

Disconnect & Connect Comments

Rating: 5.0

In languid surroundings
A sense of disconnect takes over
I sit in aimless complacency
Time floats away in blue sky.
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Savita Tyagi
COMMENTS
Susan Williams 06 March 2023

oh, how you have captured this mental and spiritual restlessness! 5 thousand stars and a fav for this extraordinary piece of writing

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Savita Tyagi 06 March 2023

Thank you so much Susan for reading the poem and for your lovely comment. It is so encouraging

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 March 2020

Every field of knowledge has some thing to offer In contemplative mind all gets connected To show a clear path of understanding........so touching and true with lofty theme. This is really a beautiful poem having an impressive inscription. Full vote.

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Indira Renganathan 11 August 2018

The wandering mind is searching for knowledge while the contemplating mind is wise enough to get all things connected...good thought suitable for a good poem Savita...10++++

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Ramesh Rai 05 June 2018

Entire creation is the field of knowledge. Yoga and Biyoga are the two paths to reach the destination. When I am connecting myself to one naturally I will be disconnected from other.. A universal truth is peeping behind. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 May 2018

Every field of knowledge has some thing to offer In contemplative mind all gets connected To show a clear path of understanding.

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Amitava Sur 06 June 2015

By disconnecting you have actually connected yourself more firmly and rigidly to the soul to know more and more what may not be available in books or nearby.... you are excavating mentally than physically... very nice Savita.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 March 2015

Reading this poem I was reminded the moto of my college, a verse from Holy Bible. Prove all things hold fast that which is good............................10

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Daniel Brick 06 February 2015

You call your thoughts random, but they're not arbitrary. You take in this poem two opposites and show how mentally the process of both lead to the same sense of things interrelated. The mind thinks things through and then comes to rest in a world ordered by its random thoughts. Coming to rest - what a wonderful goal for the poetic mind to reach! You've taken us there repeatedly, Savita!

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 January 2015

A Beautiful poem on our today's life. Google offer us a lot. Just click and we get all the information we want. No need for any dictionary, search it in few seconds. Really it help us a lot. Loved it.

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Tushar Ray 26 January 2015

I enjoyed very much this poem of a reader's wondering mind trying to focus in quest of knowledge by goggling. Thank you poet Savita Tyagi

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Valsa George 25 January 2015

In a languid mood, mind travels light to higher and higher altitudes! In a mood of self abandon which is the bliss of retired life, a good book is a great companion and Google opens before us wide vistas of knowledge! A beautiful poem!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 January 2015

Every field of knowledge has some thing to offer 'Google' offers something of everything...Browse...Browse...and Browse.

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Lyn Paul 24 January 2015

Certainly enjoyed your thought provoking words Savita. How change has certainly grown through the decades. I thank You

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