Thursday, November 27, 2008

Disconnect Comments

Rating: 5.0

disconnect
get away from the fears
runaway from the years of tears and pain
leave this place behind
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Alexander Hale
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~ Jon London ~ 28 February 2009

When emotion is written this way, tears of ink drip down the page. Well done 10 Best wishes Jon

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

No, don't kill them, but kill the guilty concious and the thought.Nice works Hale.

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so much pain and death in this poem but yet it was a great write to go with 10/10

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Alexander Hale

Alexander Hale

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