Discipline Comments
March on your toe,
with the head towards time;
Work with your hands,
with your heart looking at time.
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awesome poem. you have a great sense of poetry. loved the last stanza. All the best in life :)
March on your toe, head, hands, heart. Discipline is where value of time exists, Dopnt confuse your mind. the very first verse of your poem is so good and commanding March on your toe. you teach wonderful discipline to young minds and you will inspire a lot of people as a poetess. God bless you in your noble work. like your poem very much. tony
Discipline and stipulating time for once duty is a beautiful subject and by this there is a good poem here which likes much.
Great work.... Would have loved if the same word wasn't repeated so much in the 3rd para..... But kudos for perfect rhyming.... Plz do read and comment on my works as well..... :)
Beautiful and perfect rhyme. Please also comment and vote to my poems
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