Friday, August 25, 2017

Discerning Eye Comments

Rating: 5.0

L-et your discerning eye
H-ave the clear sight or view;
E-verything is nice and pleasant,
N-othing will make you blue.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 August 2017

G-lowing light in the bright sky Uses not the dark or gray. Zone of beauty and warmth Makes the cloud white up high; Beautiful poem describing a pair of elegant eyes...nicely written. 10 for it. Subhas

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 August 2017

Thank you so much, Subhas.... Have a blessed moment👍👍👍

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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