Wednesday, October 20, 2021

Disbelief Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Its there; though you cant see it
For this fog of closed thinking
Heaven's solid reality.
Our world's, this eve; as thick in!
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james watkin
fog heaven Disbelief
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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 October 2021

I cite your start here: Disbelief It's there; though you can't see it, since there are few grammar mistakes in this part.. I regrad your poem as surprising and marvelous, but grammar mistakes are very irritating. Thank you for sharing

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James 28 May 2022

Thanks for your concern! Yes I do make such mistakes

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james watkin

james watkin

Melbourne Australia
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