Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Disaster Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

have you ever felt like i do?
the time I passed without you
the nights passed with your memories
can you feel that pain time
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Fatima Obaid
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Khalida Bano Ali 29 August 2015

An amazing painting of human sentiments................................10

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Chinedu Dike 24 August 2015

A lovely depiction of heartbreak occasioned by disappointment in bliss of love. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Fatima. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

An excellent poem, filled with passion, intensity, thoughts of love, it's loss, revenge, a poetical extravaganza of emotions and feelings culminating in a poem of random ideas and prophetic imagery! Great poem, thank you for sharing it! RoseAnn

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