Disaster (Cinquain) Comments

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I like your succinct poems! Full p

Beautiful cinquain...leaves a lot to imagine.

With love and prayers, let we hope that the bad things will be gone sooner and people there will rebuild life again but also better than before again. Thanks Kavya for this good poem for humanity_Soul

The earth often shakes to remind men of their fragility. It is indeed very tragic what has happened in Philippines and my heart goes out to them and I hope they rebuild their battered lives as fast as possible... Good writing and keep it up.

what can i say someone who can say so much in so little is briliant

The Philippines being a small country could not manage the terrible YOLANDO the typhoon. Here there was nothing what man could have done. In future, it seems many islands will be submerged and the earth has no history of any miracles of a landscape being retained for ever.. But we feel the share of the pangs the islanders have been undergoing..

It was indeed a disaster of such tragic intensity! In few words, you have crystallised the entire horror! A perfect cinquain! !

Glad you wrote a poem on this topic... excellent write