Friday, October 5, 2018

Disappointments Comments

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When my heart feels sad
It stays sad
No coaxing, cajoling
Lifts it up
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Aniruddha Pathak 28 November 2018

Ups and downs Are parts of life Better days will come again But till that day my heart will cry And will not listen to what I say, Very well said. Heart has reasons that head hardly knows, Head may bot but heart always shows.

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Ruta Mohapatra 28 November 2018

Thank you for taking the time to visit my poem and for the comment!

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2018

This is what we feel sometimes if things do not turn up as we have expected. You have nicely crafted a poem about such feeling. beautiful indeed. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Ruta Mohapatra 18 October 2018

Thank you for not only reading my poem but also understanding the sentiment captured in it!

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Aaron Marchant 05 October 2018

Nicely expressed. Sometimes we can only wait until the clouds pass...

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Ruta Mohapatra 06 October 2018

Thank you for reading my poem and for the comment!

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