Disappointment Poem by Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

Disappointment

Rating: 5.0


I have reached
as far as my arms could stretch
I gave
all that I ever possessed
And somehow does it feel
that whatever I done
wasn't enough
for others to see

Wednesday, July 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: disappointment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini shibu 25 July 2018

People are never satisfied, just ignore Self satisfaction matters.. Good one Mario

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 July 2018

Disappointment provokes thoughts and scribbles mind. Still we search for the possession for joy. An interesting sharing is done here...10

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Robert Murray Smith 25 July 2018

We see failure in this poem to achieve one's potential. Whatever, that is.++10

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