Wednesday, March 23, 2005

Disappointment Comments

Rating: 4.5

Plans are shattered, hopes lost
Amid a tangle of resentful thoughts:
The mind receives a dulling thud
For its excited time has all been spent
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Philippa Lane
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Emily Nunchuck 03 April 2005

This is amazing. I feel I can relate because you wrote this at my age, and I love all of the imagery.

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Chichester, West Sussex, England
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