Friday, May 16, 2008
Disappointment Comments
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When I am sad or something is wrong,
it's because of a disappointment.
It's been 12 years and sometin always goes wrong.
I wonder the two people who made me,
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Bob Gibson
16 May 2008
Tori! let your self go in your poems! you have held back, rewrite it! using the samef eeling of dissapointment! write when you are angry! regards Bob
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7/25/2025 9:44:38 PM # 1.0.0
keep writing tori.... i would love to be reading them....... i think u've got talent..... don't blame urself for anything that wasnt ur fault... i can c dat u r in a happy family now... cheer up girl...... :) take care.....