Sunday, March 25, 2018

Disappearing Beacon Comments

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S-un is now setting
D-irectly below the line,
G-low is just fading.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Nudershada Cabanes 25 March 2018

A beautiful sunset is painted in your poem. Wonderful acrostic haiku.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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