the blemish on the moon
was made to be seen as
a patient old woman
ready to wrap me in her
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I can see your creative mind being wrapped up from the blemish on your emotions and content with the magic of the rabbit. The generation gap of different perceptions is top marks to you and I am sure it will merge with son's eventually as it has with my grown up children. A philosophical creative poem Indira. 10 Karin
prof... sigh....montage and the internet but seriously isnt it better....rabitts just run off... now dont they... very nice...cheers
I prefer your creative version of reality. Excellent write. Kind wishes, Sandra
i think it is not about generation gap, but a unique outlook towards life of every person.and somehow we have to accept it........
Enjoy the show... Learn from your son... So that you can pass it on to him later with the lesson of your experiance!
generation and the gap between them...........life is all about negotiating and taking one's share and be content with it...........we all seek the rabbits and the old ladies...while the gadgets respond to careless finger tips...Nice write Indira...read my latest poem BEYOND....when you have time
I like this poem very much indeed. There is angst for the forgotten fairy tales of your childhood, as well as a certain pride in the fact that your son has replaced ancient story-telling with scientific 'knowledge'. I wonder what 'his' children will believe? I poem to ponder on. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥