Monday, May 4, 2015

Dirty Tree Comments

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Today
As I sit
Under the locust tree
A Chinese man
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Raymond Farrell
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Kelly Kurt 04 May 2015

A very enjoyable poem, Raymond. How is does it go; The eye of the beholder?

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Raymond Farrell 04 May 2015

Kelly you have grasped exactly what I was driving at. I seem to do most of my thinking in regards poetry after dinner in the early evening (late afternoon) sitting under the locust tree I mention because given my schedule this is the only time I have available, so from now on you may read a lot of poems starting with me sitting under the locust tree and it is not a metaphor.

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Perth, Ontario
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