Dirty Old Man Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Dirty Old Man

Rating: 5.0


I'm a dirty old man
But it's not my fault
My children must be fed
And jobs are hard to find
Here in West Virginia

My father worked in the mines
His father worked in the mines
And his father worked in the mines
So I work in the mines
Here in West Virginia

All of them died young
Lung cancer every one
Though not one ever smoked
Just coal dust in the lungs
Here in West Virginia

I'm really not as old as I look
But this life is hard
I'll probably die young as well
I really go through hell
Here in West Virginia

I'd like to work in a office
Sit at a desk
Talk on the phone
Eat my lunch in the break room
Be able to get really clean
Get rid of this coal dust forever
But I'll always be a dirty old man
Here in West Virginia

Dirty Old Man
Tuesday, March 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dust,health,life,work,cancer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written 09-10 March 2015
Recife, Brazil
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 04 April 2015

Oh, what a poem, Sir! You have captured the pathos and tragedy of the coal-miners in this great poem written in very simple language. I am voting 10 again.

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Kim Barney 13 May 2020

Thank you, Madathil! Sorry it took me so long to respond (five years!) . I didn't know how to track comments back then.

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