Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, September 4, 2009

Dirty Game Comments

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Dirty game

Blaring voice and strong signal came
Message from boy aging 9 for playing game
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Nagesh Ratnavelu 17 September 2009

Blaring voice and strong signal came Message from boy aging 9 for playing game What game early in the morning dear son? My uncle/auntie has wished you chase and run

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Twinkle Vohra 17 September 2009

Blaring voice and strong signal came Message from boy aging 9 for playing game What game early in the morning dear son?

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Luwi Habte 17 September 2009

dear as usual this is also great poem love the rhyme as well thanks for sharing luwi

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Sagarika Shah 17 September 2009

Blaring voice and strong signal came Message from boy aging 9 for playing game What game early in the morning dear son

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Noel Horlanda 16 September 2009

Dirty games, a very good idea and speaking of dirty games you're right there are plenty around in this ruthless earth of ours. Politics is one, war is another dirty game.In the field of business one has to know the dirty tricks in making money. These are only a few samples of dirty games. Well penned.

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Lalvani Rekha 15 September 2009

Let there be discontinuance of grading system Only entry with poems and wait for response esteem

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Sulochna Pandit 15 September 2009

They have easy access to bio dates and inlet It will be their Endeavour not anybody to let

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Raju Rajput 15 September 2009

Nothing will emerge except dirt and mud It is utter nonsense and not at all good

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Jigisha Vyas 15 September 2009

Scrap or throw them who have nothing to offer Let there be thousands of ideas and thoughts to differ

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Maulin Shah 15 September 2009

Let this poem hunter be only hunting ground New talents with innovative ideas should be found

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Suwarna Patil 15 September 2009

This is how people are let loose and make messages Is it the only way to find the top passage?

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Dalsukh S 15 September 2009

Let there be thousands of ideas and thoughts to differ

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Vinod Karmakar 15 September 2009

Still they claim the custodian of heritage? Have they not gone berserk and mentally enraged?

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Jayant Manik 15 September 2009

“Not thinking of even your better half You are supporting your poems on other’s name

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Argum Sheth 15 September 2009

Message from boy aging 9 for playing game What game early in the morning dear son?

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Kant Shri 15 September 2009

This is how people are let loose and make messages Is it the only way to find the top passage?

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Sonu Dhanraj 15 September 2009

You are supporting your poems on other’s name For getting good name and earn the fame” he said

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Chaul Vania 15 September 2009

very good poem....10

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Durga Sethani 15 September 2009

Is it the only way to find the top passage? Why not they choose creative path and best usage?

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Rupa Shah 15 September 2009

You are so small and playing on somebody’s behalf, I said “Not thinking of even your better half

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