Dirty Eyes Comments

sometimes i feel the devil and his dirty eyes watching. we have felt this way so far. the poem has. the poetry has many beautiful figures

Well- penned. Temptation begins with eyes and is executed with the heart. Great moral lesson. Bravo!

living with myself. The great thought. I like it.

You have got the gut of the poem out and garnished it with the strut of your felt reality. What an intense experience, reading it. Wow.

Wow. I feel you on this one. Temptation is our greatest demon and many times evil things seem the most pleasant. Nice piece

Omg! ...and I mean that in a good way.

.....really great poem!