She lies on the ground
Scratches it to see
She is no longer human
What could she be?
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thats a very nice piece good flow...strong idea...deep feeling what else do we want in poetry liked it...its a tenner cheers
She is human no longer What could she be? The last two lines uplifts the poem from ground to sky. A good poem with a feminist touch. Best Wishes Naseer