Tuesday, April 28, 2009

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She lies on the ground
Scratches it to see
She is no longer human
What could she be?
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 May 2009

She is human no longer What could she be? The last two lines uplifts the poem from ground to sky. A good poem with a feminist touch. Best Wishes Naseer

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Saadat Tahir 28 April 2009

thats a very nice piece good flow...strong idea...deep feeling what else do we want in poetry liked it...its a tenner cheers

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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