Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Dirt Comments

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The helpless man could not kill the dirt,
He brought ashes and covered the dirt,
The rest was done by the burning sun,
The dirt was dried and changed in clay,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 03 March 2015

A profound observation, Sir, which we normally miss (10) .

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Sarmad Mirza 03 March 2015

interesting one as always by the poet nice! ! !

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Khalid Saifullah 03 March 2015

another beautiful philosophic poem.....................10

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