Dirge To Lily. Comments

Fay, very nice poem. It is hard to watch a beautiful thing withr away.

Sweet poem, very well written. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the flow. Lovely write.

how a sweet dialouge with the pretty Lily! very interesting. I enjoyed reading it very and who don't love lilies :) good luck and take care sweet Fay

I think the rhyming flow was quicker/smoother in stanza's 1 & 2 than in 3, but who am I to talk? At it's root, this is a fine poem. The first stanza had me wondering if Lily was a person... ('pictures of lily' by the Who sprung to mind) . -chuck