Monday, April 2, 2007

Dirge Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a warm summer night in june
through the air I heard a tearful tune
the sweet sound of a guitar crying
shedding tears for the dead and the dying
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Bryan Lee Greer
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Dee Daffodil 02 April 2007

I see this is your first poem posted on poemhunter...so congratulations, and welcome. I really enjoyed this one...it has lovely flow to it, although sadness weeps through. Hugs, dee

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