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My mind is all over the place, I don’t know what to do
I had no one else to talk to, that’s why I’m calling you
I couldn’t take it any longer, I just had to know
I had to talk to her, now I’ll tell you of my woe
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Wow, time stopped still waiting for her reply. Has she not got any people skills? It makes a great poem though. You should have said, 'I do like myself, but I'm going off you! '. I think you would need counciling if you went with her. Lucky escape. Nice poem though.10/10.
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7/28/2025 7:46:17 PM # 1.0.0
Wonderful Bilal. Last line is the essence of the poem. Keep up the good work............10/10.