Monday, May 5, 2025

Dire Paradoxes: Part I Comments

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Remus awoke; his fur was soaked in dew.
The air was crisp, and the day dawned new.
In the breeze, his white fur was wrinkled,
And in the morning sun, his gray eyes twinkled.
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Timber Koleden
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Isadora Quagmire 05 May 2025

What a grand poem! You tell an engaging story and the rhyme is excellent too!

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