Dinosaur Comments
Those long dead reptiles
residing in my garage
that perfect Mustang
that brings me to that cafe
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Ok, so it seems you own, or at least drive, a perfect Mustang. [car or horse? ] but i want to know MORE about the reptiles. T. Rex? or some of the 'less-known': Psittacosaurus, Shantungosaurus, & Therizinosaurus And those who drink coffee? bri :)
Thanks, Bri! And it is indeed the car...Those other actual reptiles...now there's knowledge we all want!
Beautiful Tanka with past memories of Dinosaur, Mustang and sooting pool is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you, Kumarmani! These are actual memories...now becoming their own dinosaurs.
Haha, take the ride today..You got to do that more often, then those dinosaur and memories never extinct but forever young ang glory :)
Kick the ground with style, dinosaur or even if the skeleton turn to be petrol now haha just live back memories, mustang will drive u high and cool like before... Here we go :) , love the spirit!
Thanks so much, Soul! You've inspired me to take an evening drive....and how those old ancient dinosaurs keep this one alive!
Interesting write. Dinosaur of past, Mustang of present and shooting pool...Beautiful combination.
so, let me get this straight. you have dead dinosaurs in your garage AND at least one frisky horse? are you a 'senior hustler'? ? ? entertaining. bri :)
I'll be honest I saw Dinosaurs and I couldn't resist I have two young boys self explanatory..but I was pleasantly surprised because the content appealed to me more. Mustang and pool table I should break into song..These are a few of my favourite things ... :)
Excellent! I am glad to hear about that pleasant surprise. Thank you so much for reading.
That perfect Mustang- may it forever take people back to their youth be it in the 20's,30's,40's.50's,60's,70's,80's,90's, and the 2000's. Your poem incites dreams of beaded dresses swinging to the Charleston, poodle skirts swinging to the do-wops, mini-skirts twisting.... and of course, the ice cream parlors and the pool halls and the roller skating rinks.... seniors in high school turning into senior citizens but always dreaming of that perfect Mustang. Love this piece. 10 of course
Thank you so much, Susan. Indeed there is a dream quality to the place. There's a giant painting of James Dean over one of the tables. It isn't kitsch, or something new. It looks like it hasn't been touched in decades. And the atmosphere does seem to attract and accommodate seniors of every type. I think you'd have a great time were you to visit the place. Thanks so much for reading, and for the insightful comments.
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8/2/2025 11:59:01 AM # 1.0.0
, i just noticed that i left a comment below THREE years ago! ! ; ( oh, well, today's comment is STILL GOOD. bri :)
Good indeed!