Saturday, November 12, 2005

Dinner In A Diner In Dansville, Ny Comments

Rating: 4.5

When I left Brooklyn
for the Rochester Institute of Technology
I’d thought
no more
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Louise Bizzari 12 November 2005

Charley Chan...reveling in poetic condescension in Dansville's Cup & Saucer- a prohibition to a bowl of chili? boost, boast, why not bolt to your physic class for a good physic, apparently constipated old men make you versatile-that old man you lovingly described isn't a soft palmed RIT'er, but I bet he's shown more respect in his worn out life than the philistine from Brooklyn-you've been on your knees to much lately boy, you need to stand up and be a man...don't make fun of the poor and put it to poetry-in Dansville.. begin again.... verse & poetry..... a soldier from Dansville died in Iraq last week-he died thinking of his old man in the Cup & Saucer....he died wishing he could be home in Dansville- where you been hiding? in the Cup & Saucer? ..Naw-

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Erica Francis 12 November 2005

Lovely!

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